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The story of a man who changed the ideas of America! As you read this ask yourself where would America be with out James Madison. The pages of this site may contain links to outside sources. The Lee's Summit R-7 School District is not responsible for any content. housed/published on those sites.
This blog is very detailed. Some things that I think you need to add some commas, as some sentences are run ons, like the title. It needs a comma after Madison. Other than those, this blog was fun to read.
ReplyDeleteHannah you need to put more of you in this blog! Voice!
ReplyDeleteWhat Eric said! More commas and periods!
ReplyDeleteEric stole my find! I noticed that there was no comma after the Madison, also with the works cited, you just had to put a (1) or a (2), just saying. But you really need to use more commas and periods. ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, and ..............
ReplyDeleteMore voice.
ReplyDeleteMore voice in your blog.
ReplyDeleteThere were many grammar and spelling errors that took away from the great quality of the blog.
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